50 Word Fictions

50 Word Fiction Fridays Vol. 27

Sorry for the delay in getting the 50 word fiction up, I was struggling for an idea. This week’s theme is validation.

Parking Ticket

Mouth open, he stood outside her door, while his date threw his coat at him. His shoes hit him squarely on the chest, one after the other. The offending ticket still clutched in his palm, he wondered what the big deal was. All he asked was if she validated parking.

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